Thursday, December 13, 2007

Final Presentation

21 comments:

kellyS said...

Dennis, you need to slow down and calm down a little bit. Remember to breathe while speaking and take your time.haha You did a really good job on preparing your presentation and was well written. Great Job!

laurene said...

Dennis, good job on your presentiton. My advice for you though is to talk slower and more steady because it was a little hard to understand what you had to say for each thing. Other then that you did a great job!

levi said...

you talked way too fast. i could barely understand what you were saying. you had a very well organized presentation though. you never got lost.

alenav said...

Dennis, you spoke really fast. It was really hard to understand what you were saying. Slow down. From what I understood you had good relations and a good powerpoint. Try to make a little more eye contact.Other than that good job.

samh said...

Dennis, you had a very good presentation. You spoke very very fast so it was hard to understand you much of the time. Work on that for your next presentation. You had great personal, and world connections that were very specific. Good job one your content! Again just make sure you speak SLOWLY and clearly so the audience can hear and understand you. Over all pretty good job!

annies said...

Denis! Great presentation! Very well prepared. Talk a little slower. I couldn't really understand you. Great slides. It looked like you took a long time on them. Also, good job not putting too much text on your slides. Awesome job!

Anna K said...

Dennis, you did a great job! Next time, try not to talk so fast, rely on your notes so much, and try to make more eye contact.

joeyw said...

big-D you did a really good job summarizzing what you found important in each section as well as good timing.

laurenp said...

Dennis, you kind of talked to fast and I really couldn't understand what you were saying, but you were very organized and knew what you were going to say. You also need to work on your eye contact because you kind of just read off your paper other than that you did a great job!

seand said...

Dennis, great job on your presentation. You explained your points well but you talked pretty fast. Overall you did very well especially for being the first one to present.

adama said...

Dennis,
you did a very good job of using huge words that i didn't know what meant. You made great points and good connections. You need to make a little more eye contact and read a little less for your notes.Also you talked really fast so next time put a little less info and go a little slower and it was kinda hard to stay with you.

Jackie N said...

Dennis, you were very comprehensive in your presentation and specific. You talked very fast, but its understandable since you're under a time limit. You could have looked up at the audience more, but you spoke clearly and calmly. Your presentation was great, you seem very intelligent in all you explained. Good job!!!!

brandonh2011 said...

You did a good job you were very speedy though you made some good points and connections you were a little hard to stay with you but really good job

brandonh2011 said...

You did a good job you were very speedy though you made some good points and connections you were a little hard to stay with you but really good job

ethan l said...

Good job on your presentation you did really well conecting it but you talked really fast and you were kind of stuttering sometimes.

angelicao said...

You talked a little fast at times and you needed to look at the audience more. You said um alot also. But you did a very good at explained all of the book or short stories and did a good job at relating them to yourself and the world. Very good job!

Averee said...

Dennis,
You did really well on your presentation. You were really good about making specific connections to both yourself and the world. However, you talked really fast. I realize it is hard to get so much in one presentation, but you seemed really nervous, because you were running a word per milisecond. Also, the volume of your voice faded at some points, so I completely missed some of your speech. Other than that, however, excellent job!

seanb said...

Dennis, you talked very fast during your presentation you need to slow down and take breaths. You used some very large words that some would not understand. You need to look more at your audience and use less big words overall you had a good presentation

Xavia H2011 said...

Dennis,
My only advice for you is to slow down and to look up more at your audience. I think that you had a great presentation and you had great specific examples and it made your presentation very interesting. Nice ending, and I hope you were'nt to nervous.

mmg said...

Dennis, for your final presentation you did a great job. You did great relating yourself to the books and relating it to the world. For you projects you did really good as well.

carterw said...

Dennis, slow down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your presintation was ausome. However you need to slow down because I had a very hard time unerstanding wat you were talking about. Other then that great job. Ha Ha.